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Nomad, Meet Couch Potato
Your vice is parallel
To my entire way of living
You’re a couch potato
And I’m a nomad
I’d strap the couch to my back
If you’d let me
Take you for a ride
What’s your poison?
Breathe in the smoke
Exhale the pain
Hell, I was doin’ alright
I guess I still am
It’s hard to go about these things
But that’s just because
You’re still here
And I’m not
To my entire way of living
You’re a couch potato
And I’m a nomad
I’d strap the couch to my back
If you’d let me
Take you for a ride
What’s your poison?
Breathe in the smoke
Exhale the pain
Hell, I was doin’ alright
I guess I still am
It’s hard to go about these things
But that’s just because
You’re still here
And I’m not
Published 26th Sep 2014
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26th Sep 2014 6:11am
1st Oct 2014 11:32pm
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i dunno
facts n figures lean moreso to Excel[lent] than
what's idle n Parallel... least in my sphere
but, yeah, NOmad is definitely the way 2 go when you
gotta go.
eye prefer there more than "here" but that 4th stanza is tight
do u Rag, keep writin
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i dunno
facts n figures lean moreso to Excel[lent] than
what's idle n Parallel... least in my sphere
but, yeah, NOmad is definitely the way 2 go when you
gotta go.
eye prefer there more than "here" but that 4th stanza is tight
do u Rag, keep writin
.
.
2nd Oct 2014 00:41am
Thanks for the input, K. Actually, I had written "there" in place of "here" but changed it later to emphasize that "here" means: home. But I see why it may come across weirdlike.
But I'm flattered that you felt it was worth noting! Thank you again :)
But I'm flattered that you felt it was worth noting! Thank you again :)
