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Another poem for the lonely
That feeling when you know you fucked up, try to fix it & can't.
That feeling when you realize you thought you could do it & can't.
That feeling when you notice you don't have as many friends as you once had & feel lonely as ever.
When you try to make someone happy when you hurt them in the past & they don't want you.
When you don't care what happens to you anymore.
When your best friend becomes a stranger....
When you need someone there for you & your "friends" don't have time for you.
When you honestly don't give a fuck what happens next.
When you want to leave & never look back, because in the end you're lonely & there's nobody there for you anyways.
When you go through so many things in the short amount of years you have lived & can't bare the thought of the future.
That feeling when you realize you thought you could do it & can't.
That feeling when you notice you don't have as many friends as you once had & feel lonely as ever.
When you try to make someone happy when you hurt them in the past & they don't want you.
When you don't care what happens to you anymore.
When your best friend becomes a stranger....
When you need someone there for you & your "friends" don't have time for you.
When you honestly don't give a fuck what happens next.
When you want to leave & never look back, because in the end you're lonely & there's nobody there for you anyways.
When you go through so many things in the short amount of years you have lived & can't bare the thought of the future.
Published 25th Sep 2014
| Edited 28th Sep 2014
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25th Sep 2014 5:15pm
Your words hit on a very personal level. This poem is so true and I believe most everybody can relate to at least one part of it, if not the whole thing. Awesome write!
26th Sep 2014 3:04am
It is a truthful write. we all feel this way at one time or another. Enjoyed it Welcome to the DUP.
26th Sep 2014 6:08am
you have a lot of passion in your writing and I really like this feeling that was coming your poem because I too, relate to it. one thing I worry about however since I can relate so well is how are you were actually doing currently. Hope you were able to purge a little with this and that you feel better now
26th Sep 2014 7:34pm
Hey Young Naat !!!
Very REAL poem, keep on writing ... !!!
The words help to release the pain, take it from an old fella ...
What you have expressed about, many struggle to do !!!
That, in itself, is proof of the positive light within you, keep on keeping on .....
Even if things get worse, they will, if you keep going, get better ...
Oh, and think you've got your you's out of sync in line 2 ...
Otherwise, good write !
Big V
Very REAL poem, keep on writing ... !!!
The words help to release the pain, take it from an old fella ...
What you have expressed about, many struggle to do !!!
That, in itself, is proof of the positive light within you, keep on keeping on .....
Even if things get worse, they will, if you keep going, get better ...
Oh, and think you've got your you's out of sync in line 2 ...
Otherwise, good write !
Big V
29th Oct 2014 11:02am
