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No More!!!
I've sat beside and watched it happen
one too many times
waiting for it all to stop
waiting for it to die
not knowing what will come or go
not knowing when or where
I've had enough, I'll take no more
this is stoping here.
one too many times
waiting for it all to stop
waiting for it to die
not knowing what will come or go
not knowing when or where
I've had enough, I'll take no more
this is stoping here.
Published 15th Apr 2011
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31st Jul 2011 7:15am
I can see that you are really trying to put all of your emotion into this poem ,and I applaud you for that. Sadly the truth is that it simply needs more substance too have the impact on the reader that I think you wanted it too.
31st Aug 2012 3:08pm
this poem is about standing up for what is right and not just watching as you see someone being bullied or picked on or any of the combination. thank you for the advice I will take it into consideration but remember that more can mean less and less can mean more.
