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In The Back Seat Of My Car
The night hid the car in darkness.
But all was light between us as she straddled me
In the backseat of my car. Her beautiful lips
The softness of her cheeks, warm loving eyes
She hasn’t even kissed me yet, and I’m already bursting
Out of my jeans.
Her tongue slips into my mouth. I slowly unbutton her shirt
So I can feel her hard little nipples,
Can roll them between finger and thumb
To make her sigh in satisfaction. Her hand rests on my chest
Which she proceeds to caress with her kisses, each one
Shot through with the moist excitement of her tongue.
When she puts my hand under her skirt,
She isn’t wearing underwear.
I can feel her wetness.
She urges me on. My fingers reach inside her.
I work her gently.I can make her come, here, now
With just my fingers. But she’s already fumbling at my jeans.
I can’t do anything as she slides my erection into herself.
She cries out in pleasure. I grow harder within her velvet softness.
Hands gripping my shoulders, her moans in my ears
I stroke the smoothness of her body, the glorious small of her back,
Make a limpet of my lips and tongue, and fasten on her neck
She’s coming, she’s coming, holding me closer, closer
It’s then I make my move.
I plunge my tongue inside her mouth
And hold her hips to stop her swaying. And I thrust up inside her
Faster and harder, again and again, taking her breath away
Making her gasp and cry and moan and beg, don’t stop, don’t stop!
Now, she’s climaxing. A starburst of passion.
I love her so fucking much.
We both explode, in the back seat of my car.
And lie spent, all energy gone.
The funny thing is, as her pretty breasts heave with breathlessness
And her body fills up with my semen
I know I’ll somehow find the strength
To fuck her senseless all over again.
But all was light between us as she straddled me
In the backseat of my car. Her beautiful lips
The softness of her cheeks, warm loving eyes
She hasn’t even kissed me yet, and I’m already bursting
Out of my jeans.
Her tongue slips into my mouth. I slowly unbutton her shirt
So I can feel her hard little nipples,
Can roll them between finger and thumb
To make her sigh in satisfaction. Her hand rests on my chest
Which she proceeds to caress with her kisses, each one
Shot through with the moist excitement of her tongue.
When she puts my hand under her skirt,
She isn’t wearing underwear.
I can feel her wetness.
She urges me on. My fingers reach inside her.
I work her gently.I can make her come, here, now
With just my fingers. But she’s already fumbling at my jeans.
I can’t do anything as she slides my erection into herself.
She cries out in pleasure. I grow harder within her velvet softness.
Hands gripping my shoulders, her moans in my ears
I stroke the smoothness of her body, the glorious small of her back,
Make a limpet of my lips and tongue, and fasten on her neck
She’s coming, she’s coming, holding me closer, closer
It’s then I make my move.
I plunge my tongue inside her mouth
And hold her hips to stop her swaying. And I thrust up inside her
Faster and harder, again and again, taking her breath away
Making her gasp and cry and moan and beg, don’t stop, don’t stop!
Now, she’s climaxing. A starburst of passion.
I love her so fucking much.
We both explode, in the back seat of my car.
And lie spent, all energy gone.
The funny thing is, as her pretty breasts heave with breathlessness
And her body fills up with my semen
I know I’ll somehow find the strength
To fuck her senseless all over again.
Published 14th Apr 2011
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14th Apr 2011 11:51am
Powerful imagery! You are a good erotic wordsmith. Taking me back to the days of Chesapeake Boulevard, the James River and those "not so private" drives where we used to........
You are definitely becoming one of my favorites here.
I like it!
You are definitely becoming one of my favorites here.
I like it!
14th Apr 2011 12:35pm
Thank you! Believe it or not, I've never actually written erotic poetry before joining this website, thank you for your support!
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