The Mother of the Abyss

Your dark gift for story telling through poetry is what keeps me interested in your work.  While I admit that I don't know much about Tiamat, just knowing that you know makes the poem what it is. . .unique.  Enjoyed, Sir Hades.  xo, Devlin.

if you're interested then Tiamat is a primordial deity in Sumerian mythos, her and Abzu play a major part in their creation myths. I've owned a few copies of the Necronomicon and have enjoyed the myths presented in it. Check out some of the stuff on wiki, it's always been one of my favorites along with Norse and Greek mythology.

It thrills me that my friends on DUP like my storytelling and keep coming back for more. Thank you for that and your comments, I always look forward to them

Although admittedly I only watch in passing ... Your ink conjures thoughts of Game of Thrones ... The seventh stanza is very reflective of the show but also casts a light on today's world where men and nations plot the destruction of others with ungodly beasts that fly, and swim.

Very powerful statements within this work.

I always find the Game of Thrones comments funny, mainly because I've never even seen the show or read the novels. That being said, I hope it's good otherwise my poetry stinks, but I don't think that's the case sense I get a lot of positive feedback, lol. I glad you liked it, buddy, as always your comments are most welcome.

I´m speechless. This piece is so extremely. i just love it the time feel, the scene that played out in my head, was actually like a mini-movie.

Absolutely Great

Darker

That's so cool, Darker. Thanks.

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I can see this in deep guttural vocals, coupled with blast beats and a trashy rhythm.

Also, taimat and abzu are some kickin' tunes.

Nice word(s). Cheers

thanks, Bryan, I'm glad you liked it