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Candy Trigger (Bad News)
Be a strong girl
Keep it inside
Be a warrior
One of the guys
Be enchanting
Sweet like sugar
Pink glitter bullets
Candy trigger
I can't be everything,
I feel like I'm on strings
I'm breaking off from my cues
You can label me bad news
I'll curse like a sailor &
Come out like a savior to myself
Posture matters
Be a good girl
shut your mouth
Straighten your pearls
Be curious
Retain info
Then go home to him
Become a nympho
I can't be everything
I feel like I'm on strings
I'm breaking off from my cues
You can label me bad news
I'll curse like a sailor &
Come out like a savior to myself
Grew up with dolls
Now I've become one
Prop me as you like
And have your fun
Do you hear me?
Does it matter
I see through it now
Illusion shattered
I can't be everything
I feel like I'm on strings
I'm breaking off from my cues
You can label me bad news
I'll curse like a sailor &
Come out like a savior to myself
Be enchanting
Sweet like sugar
Pink glitter bullets
Candy trigger
Keep it inside
Be a warrior
One of the guys
Be enchanting
Sweet like sugar
Pink glitter bullets
Candy trigger
I can't be everything,
I feel like I'm on strings
I'm breaking off from my cues
You can label me bad news
I'll curse like a sailor &
Come out like a savior to myself
Posture matters
Be a good girl
shut your mouth
Straighten your pearls
Be curious
Retain info
Then go home to him
Become a nympho
I can't be everything
I feel like I'm on strings
I'm breaking off from my cues
You can label me bad news
I'll curse like a sailor &
Come out like a savior to myself
Grew up with dolls
Now I've become one
Prop me as you like
And have your fun
Do you hear me?
Does it matter
I see through it now
Illusion shattered
I can't be everything
I feel like I'm on strings
I'm breaking off from my cues
You can label me bad news
I'll curse like a sailor &
Come out like a savior to myself
Be enchanting
Sweet like sugar
Pink glitter bullets
Candy trigger
Published 12th Sep 2014
| Edited 14th Jul 2015
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Anonymous
12th Sep 2014 7:10am
"Be studious
Retain info
Then go home to him
Become a nympho"
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"Grew up with dolls
Now I've become one
Prop me as you like
And have your fun"
-really likes these lines
Retain info
Then go home to him
Become a nympho"
/
"Grew up with dolls
Now I've become one
Prop me as you like
And have your fun"
-really likes these lines
13th Sep 2014 4:44am
Be enchanting
Sweet like sugar
Pink glitter bullets
Candy trigger ... Great stanza!
Too cool song!
Sweet like sugar
Pink glitter bullets
Candy trigger ... Great stanza!
Too cool song!
28th Jan 2015 5:20pm
This piece is structured a bit more like a poem than how you write most of your songs. Shorter lines and less rhyme although it does still have the feel and flow of a song. I'd love to read a piece from you without the structure of a song at all, maybe something along the lines of free verse poetry. I think you have the depth and emotion, truth and grittyness to make for a really great piece without the use of rhyme at all. I'm not saying to go against what you enjoy writing as far as your style, but I'm curious to see what you could write if you weren't limited by having to use structure and rhyme. Just food for thought :) Awesome work as always!
