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she transports him to another place...
she liked to put him down
in front of her friends,
which was fine until he
got carried away...
in front of her friends,
which was fine until he
got carried away...
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Re: she transports him to another place...
10th Sep 2014 8:07am
That is quite sad, and I know all to well how it feels. Speaks volumes, great stuff Paul. :)
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10th Sep 2014 3:55pm
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10th Sep 2014 10:02am
I really enjoy the double meanings in a lot of your work. :) I just pictured a group of girl stumbling out the door with him in their arms.
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10th Sep 2014 4:03pm
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10th Sep 2014 7:04pm
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10th Sep 2014 8:15pm
thanks...I think my 'style' can be
best described as the 2 dwarfs
that Snow White never mentions,
Little and Often..:) although Dopey
would perhaps be more accurate..!
best described as the 2 dwarfs
that Snow White never mentions,
Little and Often..:) although Dopey
would perhaps be more accurate..!
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