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space...
she said she needed some space,
so I gave it to her,
but to be frank it left me in a
bit of a hole...
so I gave it to her,
but to be frank it left me in a
bit of a hole...
Published 9th Sep 2014
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10th Sep 2014 00:27am
Swallowed you whole?
I'm always looking forward
to your sensational work.
Honestly.
No need to emphasize on it
but
HONESTLY :-).
I'm always looking forward
to your sensational work.
Honestly.
No need to emphasize on it
but
HONESTLY :-).
10th Sep 2014 00:37am
I'd like to say I can't thank
you enough...
well I could, but it would
go on for ages and you'd
probably tell me to shut
up..:)
but seriously, thanks...
you enough...
well I could, but it would
go on for ages and you'd
probably tell me to shut
up..:)
but seriously, thanks...
10th Sep 2014 6:42am
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10th Sep 2014 12:36pm
10th Sep 2014 8:25am
If it's only "a bit of a hole" you can climb out. :P
Always interesting Paul.
Always interesting Paul.
10th Sep 2014 12:39pm
13th Sep 2014 00:56am
13th Sep 2014 1:18am
Fen, if I could write the way
you do, I'd be chuffed...
do they say 'chuffed' over
there, I mean dead happy,
of course..:)
you do, I'd be chuffed...
do they say 'chuffed' over
there, I mean dead happy,
of course..:)
Dude you have a very special skill, be proud...
Nope, but I've always loved British lingo/slang, so I know what it means...
and bob's your uncle, sir... ;)
Nope, but I've always loved British lingo/slang, so I know what it means...
and bob's your uncle, sir... ;)
13th Sep 2014 1:55am
