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Observational Poems
Water
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Water
In the ocean
I feel like the option
to float
doesn't exist.
There is only
being pulled under.
Written by
jadielue
(Jade.)
Published
4th Sep 2014
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Re: Water
PleasuresOfPain
4th Sep 2014 4:55am
Why hasn't anyone commented on this?This piece gets you thinking.Nicely done!!!
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Re: Water
DontSpeakImOnFleek
28th May 2015 6:39am
That was...DEEP. haha help I'm trying to earn credits
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