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Endure
How long will I endurrrrre
will I endure, Endure this pain forrrrrrrr
Cause' I don't want to care, no not anymorrrrrreee
This pain is the only thing of which I'm sure
I refuse to believe this is fate
Losing myself through the cracks
Only a human can teach a heart to hate
Innocents contains what our soul lacks..
Just take me home, take me home....
I don't believe this is God's hand
For we doom our selfs down the road
the horror which I can't withstand
A path so cold...
Just take me home just take me home!
How long will I endurrrrre
will I endure, Endure this pain forrrrrrrr
Cause' I don't want to care, no not anymorrrrrreee
This pain is the only thing of which I'm sure
My heart beats a sad melody
You hear it through my eyes
Got my hands trembling
Rely on the flow until it dies..
Just take me home, Just take me home.
Don't appreciate the emptiness
That your words contain
and you try to temp me with
A empty promise to end the pain....
Just take me home take me home
take me out for a spin, break me until you felt you win, My story will never end....
How long will I endurrrrre
will I endure, Endure this pain forrrrrrrr
Cause' I don't want to care, no not anymorrrrrreee
This pain is the only thing of which I'm surrrrrre
Please hand me the currrrre
And make me pure....
will I endure, Endure this pain forrrrrrrr
Cause' I don't want to care, no not anymorrrrrreee
This pain is the only thing of which I'm sure
I refuse to believe this is fate
Losing myself through the cracks
Only a human can teach a heart to hate
Innocents contains what our soul lacks..
Just take me home, take me home....
I don't believe this is God's hand
For we doom our selfs down the road
the horror which I can't withstand
A path so cold...
Just take me home just take me home!
How long will I endurrrrre
will I endure, Endure this pain forrrrrrrr
Cause' I don't want to care, no not anymorrrrrreee
This pain is the only thing of which I'm sure
My heart beats a sad melody
You hear it through my eyes
Got my hands trembling
Rely on the flow until it dies..
Just take me home, Just take me home.
Don't appreciate the emptiness
That your words contain
and you try to temp me with
A empty promise to end the pain....
Just take me home take me home
take me out for a spin, break me until you felt you win, My story will never end....
How long will I endurrrrre
will I endure, Endure this pain forrrrrrrr
Cause' I don't want to care, no not anymorrrrrreee
This pain is the only thing of which I'm surrrrrre
Please hand me the currrrre
And make me pure....
Published 3rd Sep 2014
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3rd Sep 2014 11:04am
Wow this song feels big time
It's very relatable in the sense of people enduring pain in their lives
Especially for those never achieving their dreams
Awesome song
It's full of emotions and passion
It's very relatable in the sense of people enduring pain in their lives
Especially for those never achieving their dreams
Awesome song
It's full of emotions and passion
13th Sep 2014 7:15am
There's no need to use words like you're singing them "anymorrrrrreee" - it is a little off putting. The words are what are important but that's my only criticism.
"My heart beats a sad melody
You hear it through my eyes"
This is the best couple of lines you have. So much said in two simple sentences. Overall, it's a real good song.
"My heart beats a sad melody
You hear it through my eyes"
This is the best couple of lines you have. So much said in two simple sentences. Overall, it's a real good song.
