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Boom Boom
boom boom
fourth of july
fireworks up high
zoom zoom
air force planes fly
pilots up high
swish swish
navy slips by
sailors kept dry
vroom vroom
army roars by
soldiers march by
boom boom
loud battle cry
we wonder why
doom doom
fourth of july
fireworks up high
zoom zoom
air force planes fly
pilots up high
swish swish
navy slips by
sailors kept dry
vroom vroom
army roars by
soldiers march by
boom boom
loud battle cry
we wonder why
doom doom
Published 30th Aug 2014
| Edited 31st Aug 2014
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31st Aug 2014 9:15am
31st Aug 2014 7:03pm
Hi Lobo, glad you stopped by. This was an assignment for an online class on metric. Spondee metric, two accented syllables in a row, can be challenging in the English language. This example shows it can be done, by associating the words to sounds... The last stanza could have been left off, kind of a political spin on the rest...
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12th Dec 2015 8:43am
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