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DEPRESSION, OH MY LOVE
The world is a place full of burden and despair
My heart has gotten heavy because of dejection
I am useless in this place I don't dance with time
These things around me only add to my torment
My head is filled with darkness and burning thoughts
I am almost listless because my energy has been drained
These feelings inside me are sometimes felt hardly
The words people say are like knives cutting my flesh open
Their hearts are made of stones and black ink
To write with evidence their emotions of hatred for me
I was the person who used to perceive the vivid colors in life
I used to take the evil words of people and turn them into roses
When I felt love for you
Oh, when I felt love you
If you could just spend a half a second in my head
If if you could feel the unhappiness of my heart
If you could just save me in time because I can't
redeem myself
I am dying, gradually and mercilessly
They are sending me off into the dead unexpectedly
and passionately
My heart has gotten heavy because of dejection
I am useless in this place I don't dance with time
These things around me only add to my torment
My head is filled with darkness and burning thoughts
I am almost listless because my energy has been drained
These feelings inside me are sometimes felt hardly
The words people say are like knives cutting my flesh open
Their hearts are made of stones and black ink
To write with evidence their emotions of hatred for me
I was the person who used to perceive the vivid colors in life
I used to take the evil words of people and turn them into roses
When I felt love for you
Oh, when I felt love you
If you could just spend a half a second in my head
If if you could feel the unhappiness of my heart
If you could just save me in time because I can't
redeem myself
I am dying, gradually and mercilessly
They are sending me off into the dead unexpectedly
and passionately
Published 25th Aug 2014
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Anonymous
25th Aug 2014 11:38pm
Sorry to hear about your depression. You need to find love but maybe it just may find you!
I don't have depression, my poetry is about writing from different perspectives because I have no strong emotions nor struggles to convey such emotion through poetry.
Anonymous
25th Aug 2014 11:53pm
Oh.
26th Aug 2014 1:31am
Good poem. I like it. I too write about depression, fear, anger, loneliness and sadness, but I'm not this way. I just write about it to branch out in my poetry. Keep up the good work.
