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Killer

Sisters in her death bed, i can't do nothing right.
She's fighting for her life while i'm fucking up mine.
I say life's dragging, whilst she's counting down the time.
I see strangers passing and i picture them with a knife, this ain't cos they're killers but my words can't describe, how much pain you're causing when you're ending a life.
So if you're about to judge some one you don't know. you better think twice.
Cos' you could be handing them a gun when suicides on their mind.



OKAY: This is not finished! I would appreciate honest opinions and criticism please, thank you.
Written by Anonymous_Voice
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