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Goodbye My Dear
I see that smile
You offer me today
As though you know
That I'm not okay
You see the pain
Written on my face
As you compare me
To our broken vase
My dearest baby girl
I love you so
I'm truly sorry but
It's time to go
We spent the years
Of amazing joy together
But my wonderful daughter
I'm leaving you forever
You offer me today
As though you know
That I'm not okay
You see the pain
Written on my face
As you compare me
To our broken vase
My dearest baby girl
I love you so
I'm truly sorry but
It's time to go
We spent the years
Of amazing joy together
But my wonderful daughter
I'm leaving you forever
Published 22nd Aug 2014
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21st Sep 2014 8:12pm
Anonymous
30th Oct 2014 3:42pm
Great read.. Nice phrasing, good flow.. Very strong piece..
Dave
Dave
