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she closes the door...
as he draws near,
she closes the door
in his face...
and wonders, not
for the first time, why
he's got one...
Published 20th Aug 2014
| Edited 24th Aug 2014
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21st Aug 2014 00:44am
21st Aug 2014 00:49am
That was very rude.
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Knock knock
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.
who's there?
Ham
Ham who? Are you going to finish that?
Okay, if you'll
let...
And then he comes in. perhaps... :)
knock knock jokes are tragic..
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Knock knock
.
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.
who's there?
Ham
Ham who? Are you going to finish that?
Okay, if you'll
let...
And then he comes in. perhaps... :)
knock knock jokes are tragic..
21st Aug 2014 11:40pm
24th Aug 2014 4:53pm
some peoples' eyes, they
say, are the windows to
their souls, but this guy
has a whole door..:)
say, are the windows to
their souls, but this guy
has a whole door..:)
24th Aug 2014 5:27pm
Anonymous
5th Jul 2016 5:56am
yeah I think it's outstanding and true especially after the explaining as the door as metaphor...and there is a deep desire to want to be open, to find that rare person that won't judge a thing and will genuinely care and make the effort to put themselves in the other's shoes. Why settle for less?..I think it's powerfully profound dartford and you said so much with so little as well...power in brevity..
Michael
Michael
