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Darkness
I just can't shake this feeling
The darkness is consuming me
I don't know how to break free
Free from the pain and tragedy
Free from this evil im constantly facing
Is this how it all should be?
Can I change my destiny?
This tortuous pain won't go away
It leaves me with a feeling of great dismay
Is there any other way
To break free and no longer feel like a slave?
A slave to my demons
Lurking in the darkness
A slave to my shadows
That haunt me and cause distress
The darkness is consuming me
I don't know how to break free
Free from the pain and tragedy
Free from this evil im constantly facing
Is this how it all should be?
Can I change my destiny?
This tortuous pain won't go away
It leaves me with a feeling of great dismay
Is there any other way
To break free and no longer feel like a slave?
A slave to my demons
Lurking in the darkness
A slave to my shadows
That haunt me and cause distress
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Re: Darkness
20th Aug 2014 4:06am
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20th Aug 2014 5:42am
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Anonymous
20th Aug 2014 8:12pm
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Re: Darkness
21st Aug 2014 2:57am
Release it with your words, let it go and make it flow. Keep on writing and pouring out your heart, the purging through poetry is just the start.
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21st Aug 2014 3:35am
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30th Aug 2014 7:37am
amazing write. you convey your emotions very well! I know these feelings all to well, it just takes time. Venting through your writes is an excellent remedy and your work is amazing as well! Keep it up!
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10th Dec 2014 3:48am
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31st Aug 2014 6:35am
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6th Nov 2014 5:08pm
I have several of your poems today. You have real skill and depth of emotion. If it's ok, I'll add you as the first person on my reading list :-)
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10th Dec 2014 3:49am
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31st Dec 2014 6:59pm
Wow dark and awesome.. you are proving to never disappoint. very talented
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