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desire...
I want to see joy through your eyes
feel sorrow through your heart
and feel life through your touch...
feel sorrow through your heart
and feel life through your touch...
Published 19th Aug 2014
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19th Aug 2014 5:20pm
Your desire is simple but deeply passionate. It's interesting how you manage to convey your ardent desire with such a few words, but like you I believe sometimes less is more.
@EngrVV
@EngrVV
19th Aug 2014 11:54pm
Anonymous
25th Aug 2014 1:45am
You must have been feeling my thoughts. I have one written almost like this today. Beautiful.....luv this. Xo :)
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2014 9:14pm
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Anonymous
29th Aug 2017 7:59pm
Beautiful!
