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Taking a bath
You entered the bathroom
already naked,
beautiful like the foam-born Venus,
you laid down
closing your eyes
beginning to caress yourself,
moaning,
suddenly you rose,
putting one foot on the edge of the tub,
you looked at me,
grabbed me...
I thought by myself
"In it goes!"
and yelled
"Noooo!!!"
You got a fright,
slipped,
fell,
broke your neck....
exit the most wonderful woman in my young life.
Well, what could I say but
"Don't mess with rubber ducks!"
already naked,
beautiful like the foam-born Venus,
you laid down
closing your eyes
beginning to caress yourself,
moaning,
suddenly you rose,
putting one foot on the edge of the tub,
you looked at me,
grabbed me...
I thought by myself
"In it goes!"
and yelled
"Noooo!!!"
You got a fright,
slipped,
fell,
broke your neck....
exit the most wonderful woman in my young life.
Well, what could I say but
"Don't mess with rubber ducks!"
Published 16th Aug 2014
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16th Aug 2014 10:25pm
Tension building....
Where was this going?...
I explode.....in laughter.....LMAO....
Now you my dear sodium589 surprise your audience with your poems....
What a way to wake up.... :)
Where was this going?...
I explode.....in laughter.....LMAO....
Now you my dear sodium589 surprise your audience with your poems....
What a way to wake up.... :)
16th Aug 2014 10:40pm
Thank you, kate.
I feel deeply honoured by your comment.
I must admit that I liked this cute little duck with its anarchic sense of humour right from the beginning. Maybe it's worth exploring the potential of this character....
So, have a nice day....and take care when entering the bathroom... ;-)
I feel deeply honoured by your comment.
I must admit that I liked this cute little duck with its anarchic sense of humour right from the beginning. Maybe it's worth exploring the potential of this character....
So, have a nice day....and take care when entering the bathroom... ;-)
16th Aug 2014 11:22pm
You have a point....
There could be a few stories this rubber duckie could tell...
Mmmmm...am always careful in the bath.... ;)
There could be a few stories this rubber duckie could tell...
Mmmmm...am always careful in the bath.... ;)
22nd Aug 2014 2:21am
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