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Hate
Hate is such a strong word
But that is how I feel
Hate not knowing
Not seeing the real deal
I love you
I hate you
You make me confused
Not knowing if Today is the day I lose
Trust went out the window
When you took your love away
Now we just seat here together
It gets more and more unpleasant everyday
I hate the things we did
I hate who we did it with
Cause now we sit together
Hating everyday we spent
But that is how I feel
Hate not knowing
Not seeing the real deal
I love you
I hate you
You make me confused
Not knowing if Today is the day I lose
Trust went out the window
When you took your love away
Now we just seat here together
It gets more and more unpleasant everyday
I hate the things we did
I hate who we did it with
Cause now we sit together
Hating everyday we spent
Published 11th Aug 2014
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11th Aug 2014 3:51am
Don't we all just love to hate. I love the underlying remorse that's screaming through but what I love most is " I hate the things we did ". Makes me feel hate for what's done but not regret. More of a "It's done, now what "
Lovely.
Much love.
Lovely.
Much love.
11th Aug 2014 10:05am
Thank you very much for that. It is lots of underlying thoughts in there...it's like where do we go from here...
12th Aug 2014 5:48am
No matter what you decide, always keep your focus!!
Good write, Love the read!!
Ink on!!!
Sir Lancelott
Good write, Love the read!!
Ink on!!!
Sir Lancelott
