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This Knight
My shield, I have cast aside
My sword, is sheathed and
Sits against your bedroom door
I have abandoned my armor
Tonight
This knight
Comes to you
Open, vulnerable to your whims
Tonight, I am not a knight
I am only a simple man
With simple needs
That only you can satiate
(C) 2014 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
My sword, is sheathed and
Sits against your bedroom door
I have abandoned my armor
Tonight
This knight
Comes to you
Open, vulnerable to your whims
Tonight, I am not a knight
I am only a simple man
With simple needs
That only you can satiate
(C) 2014 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
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Re: This Knight
6th Aug 2014 6:21pm
I love the message in this! Truly what most women want.
Come as you are...open, free, pain, love...all of it...just come! Beautiful write xmar82 :)
Come as you are...open, free, pain, love...all of it...just come! Beautiful write xmar82 :)
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6th Aug 2014 6:26pm
Re: This Knight
6th Aug 2014 6:52pm
Oh dear X some one or something seems to have u truly inspired. This cant just b random. Simplistic beauty with a powerfuk msg. I soooo adore this one
Xoxoxo
Belle
Xoxoxo
Belle
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re: Re: This Knight
6th Aug 2014 7:32pm
All falsities aside. Nothing between the two except sweet passionate desire. Thank you Belle.
Re: This Knight
6th Aug 2014 7:57pm
like the soldier home from many battles, in need of a woman's comfort...
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Re: This Knight
6th Aug 2014 8:16pm
Beautiful Heartfelt ink.. simple yet speaks volumes.. vulnarable while as same time brave.. letting down those guards..laying aside defenses and being bare..open.. tis a lovely write.. with much respect..xoxo domore
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6th Aug 2014 8:18pm
Re: This Knight
7th Aug 2014 00:08am
i agee with all above....
but hashman describes it perfectly....
naked....is what you are....
nothing more desirable for a woman to see in her lover....
:)
but hashman describes it perfectly....
naked....is what you are....
nothing more desirable for a woman to see in her lover....
:)
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7th Aug 2014 6:49pm
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Anonymous
7th Aug 2014 3:21pm
A true joy to read this little tale of romance!
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Anonymous
22nd Dec 2014 2:46pm
oh my. this one...well, you knocked it out of the park. this one is stunning.
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