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Tell Me More

You slide your tongue around my waist so easily...
Make every ounce of pleasure black as sut...
Lift my eagerness to exacerbated levels, just to cast them to the sea...
Kiss my lips with poison, push into my walls with thorns...
Tare at my soul with silence, to only ask what's wrong...
Have I not given enough of myself?
Do you still want more?
Is it fair I stand in the darkened places, watching your love pour out onto another's lips?

So tell me, do I continue to smile or let you go?

By:RFULLER 8/1/14

Written by blueeyes415263

Published 2nd Aug 2014

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Re: Tell Me More

Sadsmiles

2nd Aug 2014 6:42am

Oh my ... love this
Dark and romantic. Hell yeah kudos

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blueeyes415263

2nd Aug 2014 7:22am

Thank you sadsmiles... Appreciate the love :)

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Re: Tell Me More

Sir_Lancelott (Lance)

2nd Aug 2014 7:27am

Sexy dark and awesome sweets!!
Love this write from your pen!!!
Beautiful read!!

Sir Lancelott

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blueeyes415263

2nd Aug 2014 9:46am

Thank you so lance :)

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Re: Tell Me More

Anonymous

3rd Aug 2014 11:06pm

Oh I feel is one myself. Yep.....I do! Sorry your sadness. It sucks knowing another touches them when you've given your all and they have just come along. RL for me! Hope you find peace in the light soon. Xo :)