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198
I love you like a fat kid loves cake, like a criminal loves crime, like a boxer loves punches, like a bee loves pollen. I just simply love you.
Published 29th Jul 2014
| Edited 17th Mar 2016
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- Edited 17th Mar 2016 5:39am
17th Mar 2016 5:38am
I like this one Dre. Yes it is short but it somehow says so much. I wrote a poem called, "Drawn To You" about a very similar theme to yours. Mine is basically an expanded version of '198' really. You'll see it on my poems list.
