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The Box
the darkness is my past the suffing i got i cant excape it and i cant fight it .
i try to tell my self the past is in the past so i locked my past in a box and closed the lid tight .
but the lid of that box is slowly opening up i push the lid down to keep it closed but that is not enough at all anymore .
i am so scared i will lose the ones that i love if that box ever opens up so i try everyday to keep whats inside sealed.
but its opeing and its getting harder and harder to breath and everything thats in side of it is something that i cant fight and i can never excape from...........
i try to tell my self the past is in the past so i locked my past in a box and closed the lid tight .
but the lid of that box is slowly opening up i push the lid down to keep it closed but that is not enough at all anymore .
i am so scared i will lose the ones that i love if that box ever opens up so i try everyday to keep whats inside sealed.
but its opeing and its getting harder and harder to breath and everything thats in side of it is something that i cant fight and i can never excape from...........
Published 29th Jul 2014
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29th Jul 2014 3:01pm
Inner turmoil, dodgy past, struggling to keep control.. all summed up really quickly and effectively,
As criticism, a couple of spelling mistakes. (you ask for honest)
But to read, great.. the box analogy makes it very easy to follow.. whether you can escape or not, with the majority of cases, I'd say it's better to keep that box closed
Good write
Be Happy
As criticism, a couple of spelling mistakes. (you ask for honest)
But to read, great.. the box analogy makes it very easy to follow.. whether you can escape or not, with the majority of cases, I'd say it's better to keep that box closed
Good write
Be Happy
29th Jul 2014 4:12pm
i thank you for telling me what i spelled wrong and when i get a chance i will fix it and thank you for likeing it .
Anonymous
29th Jul 2014 4:30pm
being trap in a box is like being drown under water but what they both have in common we can always rise back up. great work
29th Jul 2014 4:39pm
I relate to this in so many way. You have to face your demons straight on and tell them that they have no more over you. Enjoyed.
