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Is it ok
Is it ok for me stay inside my room,
surrounded by darkness
all alone?
Is it ok for me to hate myself,
as if acted upon instinct?
Is it ok to lay on the floor thinking of
how pathetic i am?
I guess i'm not aloud to... but i do it any way :)
surrounded by darkness
all alone?
Is it ok for me to hate myself,
as if acted upon instinct?
Is it ok to lay on the floor thinking of
how pathetic i am?
I guess i'm not aloud to... but i do it any way :)
Published 29th Jul 2014
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Nice little piece of honest writing there, I think a lot of us do that don't we, who's to say you're not allowed though, if you're all alone no one can Point it out.. comforting isn't it, joke.
But still,
Enjoyable short read
"as if acted upon by instinct"
Good way of putting it.
Be happy
But still,
Enjoyable short read
"as if acted upon by instinct"
Good way of putting it.
Be happy
30th Jul 2014 4:33am
1st Aug 2014 8:31am
I don't think anyone's really happy in this world. Behind the masks, we're all inside our heads, surrounded by darkness..doing things we're not "allowed to"...so be You and don't give a damn haha i liked this poem very much :)
