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I Am
Eyes of grey blue, flash fire and red...
Arms, injected ink covered armor...
Hands of steel strength but gentle as a whisper...
Smile tearing at my soul, bringing peace to my mind...
Voice, deep and sultry, harvest sounds of pleasure...
Kisses so sweet, bitterness dies from its flavor...
Body tantalizing in his nakedness, I desire him fully...
Weave around my soul with your lustful words...
Breath intoxicating air onto my breasts...
Twist your full measure within my greed, and find your home there...
For I will be the stone in which to sharpen your blade...
The reflection that you see as the rain falls...
I am the love your soul craves, and you are mine!
By:RFULLER 7/24/14
Arms, injected ink covered armor...
Hands of steel strength but gentle as a whisper...
Smile tearing at my soul, bringing peace to my mind...
Voice, deep and sultry, harvest sounds of pleasure...
Kisses so sweet, bitterness dies from its flavor...
Body tantalizing in his nakedness, I desire him fully...
Weave around my soul with your lustful words...
Breath intoxicating air onto my breasts...
Twist your full measure within my greed, and find your home there...
For I will be the stone in which to sharpen your blade...
The reflection that you see as the rain falls...
I am the love your soul craves, and you are mine!
By:RFULLER 7/24/14
Published 25th Jul 2014
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25th Jul 2014 5:41am
I am enjoyng a words"bitterness dies from its flavor...
Body tantalizing in his nakedness, I desire him fully...
Weave around my soul with your lustful words... "
Body tantalizing in his nakedness, I desire him fully...
Weave around my soul with your lustful words... "
25th Jul 2014 5:49am
Favourite line "Arms inject ink coloured armour" - good description of tattoo. Poem could describe the sight women would like in a sailor in port. (Thinking about the song "All the nice girls love a sailor..")
25th Jul 2014 6:59am
26th Jul 2014 3:12am
Cop eh? ('Bobby' in our vernacular.) Inspired this rhyming comment:
You have painted an 'arresting' sight
Of a man about to share her night;
She will sure feel safe in his arms
While he feasts on her sexy charms.
You have painted an 'arresting' sight
Of a man about to share her night;
She will sure feel safe in his arms
While he feasts on her sexy charms.
Since re-reading your poem, I can say two favourite lines are:
Hands of steel strength but gentle as a whisper...
Smile tearing at my soul, bringing peace to my mind...
Voice, deep and sultry, harvest sounds of pleasure...
Body tantalizing in his nakedness, I desire him fully...
Weave around my soul with your lustful words...
Breath intoxicating air onto my breasts...
Twist your full measure within my greed, and find your home there...
For I will be the stone in which to sharpen your blade...
Hands of steel strength but gentle as a whisper...
Smile tearing at my soul, bringing peace to my mind...
Voice, deep and sultry, harvest sounds of pleasure...
Body tantalizing in his nakedness, I desire him fully...
Weave around my soul with your lustful words...
Breath intoxicating air onto my breasts...
Twist your full measure within my greed, and find your home there...
For I will be the stone in which to sharpen your blade...
26th Jul 2014 3:18am
26th Jul 2014 8:41am
We also refer to our policemen as "the boys in blue" (not used about our navy sailors, who are traditionally known as "Jack Tars"). This inspired a further rhyming comment:
Lucky girl! A boy in blue
Is up to spend the night with you;
I'm sure that you'll keep him warm
When he is out of uniform!
Lucky girl! A boy in blue
Is up to spend the night with you;
I'm sure that you'll keep him warm
When he is out of uniform!
25th Jul 2014 10:18pm
DAMN, That's my kind of woman!!
Great write sweets!!
Beautiful you!
Love the read!!
Sir Lancelott
Great write sweets!!
Beautiful you!
Love the read!!
Sir Lancelott
25th Jul 2014 10:31pm
25th Jul 2014 10:51pm
The girl depict here sounds erotic, dark and powerful...yeah me likes alot;)
25th Jul 2014 11:30pm
26th Jul 2014 6:17pm
"Twist your full measure within my greed, and find your home there...
For I will be the stone in which to sharpen your blade" love that part,Beautiful Intensely Passionate Ink..enjoyed!!!
For I will be the stone in which to sharpen your blade" love that part,Beautiful Intensely Passionate Ink..enjoyed!!!
26th Jul 2014 7:17pm
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