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MARS IS A WOMAN
and pretty
sexy too.
Those soft
folds,
those fancy
rocks
bejewelling her...
Who painted
this desert peace,
this smile
of a virgin
hiding her
moisture
within?
(on seeing first photos from NASA's Spirit Rover)
sexy too.
Those soft
folds,
those fancy
rocks
bejewelling her...
Who painted
this desert peace,
this smile
of a virgin
hiding her
moisture
within?
(on seeing first photos from NASA's Spirit Rover)
Published 23rd Jul 2014
| Edited 30th Jul 2014
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27th Jul 2014 6:42pm
Candycrier, luv :-* ~
This is such pure poesy! So effervescent and lovely, you paint an image of great beauty and simplicity in sparse verse embodying elements of timelessness and sweet restfulness. You have a masterful pen, Sir. Thank you for sharing it with us. :-*
This is such pure poesy! So effervescent and lovely, you paint an image of great beauty and simplicity in sparse verse embodying elements of timelessness and sweet restfulness. You have a masterful pen, Sir. Thank you for sharing it with us. :-*
27th Jul 2014 11:56pm
I am very interested in other planets, and was much impressed when I saw the photos of Mars. It has some very feminine landscapes. I thank you profusely for your comments.
