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You're Intoxicated
You're intoxicated
This feeling numbs you down to your
—Toes
The flows convict you
Challenge ya heartbeat
Not strong?
Turn you to stone
High off this.
Ecstasy.
Blurred vision
Buzzy feelin
Swirling around you, swirling, swirling
Infinitely
Infinity
Always
You're intoxicated
This feeling numbs you down to your
—Toes
The flows convict you
Challenge ya heartbeat
Not strong?
Turn you to stone
High off this.
Ecstasy.
Blurred vision
Buzzy feelin
Swirling around you, swirling, swirling
Infinitely
Infinity
Always
You're intoxicated
Published 23rd Jul 2014
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Anonymous
24th Jul 2014 5:22am
I like the the way this piece reads, quick and fast, like a rush, like when one is intoxicated. Welcome to DU.
25th Jul 2014 8:18pm
