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As I Watched~
You caught my eye
In your nakedness
You were truly
Beautiful
Your veil was
Lifted
I watched you as
You drank the
Sweetness from
The center
While the wind
Gently pushed you
Both back and
Forth
You danced together
Gracefully
As I watched
In your nakedness
You were truly
Beautiful
Your veil was
Lifted
I watched you as
You drank the
Sweetness from
The center
While the wind
Gently pushed you
Both back and
Forth
You danced together
Gracefully
As I watched
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22nd Jul 2014 3:06pm
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22nd Jul 2014 3:20pm
There's beauty everywhere. We live life fast. Most
times never slowing down for the simple things.
I've learned to pace myself, relax and soak it all in.
I'm glad you liked this Jack_Tex..As I told you before,
I appreciate your comments.
times never slowing down for the simple things.
I've learned to pace myself, relax and soak it all in.
I'm glad you liked this Jack_Tex..As I told you before,
I appreciate your comments.
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22nd Jul 2014 3:54pm
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22nd Jul 2014 4:43pm
The romance between a butterfly and a flower was vividly caught in your poetic web with such beautiful weaving of words. As a nature lover like me, I love the soothing image it brings!
@EngrVV
@EngrVV
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22nd Jul 2014 5:20pm
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22nd Jul 2014 6:51pm
Tommie you are an amazing artist and in your art is what poetry and love is. I say this not in hopes for a response but because your good at what you do! Please know when we say good things or bad its an opinion not for you to respond to unless your heart tells you too.
Love you angel keep being magical
Love you angel keep being magical
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22nd Jul 2014 8:45pm
You're too kind seascape. Your words are always appreciated my dear. Thank you very much. :)
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