Stinging, Sloppy, Free

I love rain any poem with rain in it I like good job

haha well thanks. i'm kind of new to this so thanks for the read

I like how you brought the end to bring the positive out of the negative

Thanks very much

the meaning has been conveyed really beautifully.

why thank you. i thought it was too simple, but people seem to like it

i always tend to get into a little complex imagery..so this simplicity felt a little fresh and a bit different.. i do think though that using "cuz" could have been done away with..thats my personal feel though..i believe slang forms should be used when the subject, situation or feel of the poem go in flow with it or demand it.

You're really good. I thought I'd check out your poems since you seem to like mine.

well thanks for reading, i hope you like them :)

I loved this. I loved how you brought the negative and positive together. Nicely done.

i love this poem and I can relate really well!!

Your life is much more than a box of rain!
Keep writing and posting.
bye

I love how you're comment title was 'cookie'...