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Lady in waiting
Bronze feet wrapped
in sandals
leather straps
crisscrossed
around smooth calves
Reflection in the water
she was all legs
fringe from denim
tickling her thighs
She was the lady in
the forest calling
to a lover, any lover
in sandals
leather straps
crisscrossed
around smooth calves
Reflection in the water
she was all legs
fringe from denim
tickling her thighs
She was the lady in
the forest calling
to a lover, any lover
Published 18th Jul 2014
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Anonymous
18th Jul 2014 1:45pm
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18th Jul 2014 1:55pm
18th Jul 2014 2:17pm
The "picture"..."any lover"...now will i be bad if i answer that call? Good write.
18th Jul 2014 3:08pm
18th Jul 2014 3:49pm
It occurs to that the most beautiful women are often the better poets. Very nicely done.
18th Jul 2014 4:34pm
18th Jul 2014 8:28pm
The simplicity of her desire in this piece is beautiful...we all want a lover, right? Love is what fuels me at least.
To Writer1's comment I'd say the beauty of a woman is reflected in her poetry...something you do so well. I admire the confidence that you have in your beauty...each expression of your beauty by others serves to support something that you already know.
To Writer1's comment I'd say the beauty of a woman is reflected in her poetry...something you do so well. I admire the confidence that you have in your beauty...each expression of your beauty by others serves to support something that you already know.
18th Jul 2014 9:55pm
18th Jul 2014 8:57pm
In this uncommon heatwave (in GB), the words instanced by Jack Tex have great resonance.
18th Jul 2014 9:55pm
18th Jul 2014 10:14pm
Seductive and sexy. Your're really in tune with your womanly virtues Tommie. You bleed attraction. Enjoyed.
19th Jul 2014 2:42am
19th Jul 2014 8:06pm
