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Harboring Beauty
I harbor all the stresses of the seven seaa
Hold my hand as we walk against the sand
Into the water and float away with me
Beauty lies in these eyes
Which contain passionless pain
Holding the world loveless strain
Only to in habit such a nature that is truely inhumain
I am the poet who has lost her word in the moment
A singer whom which no one has yet herd
An artist whos creativity has shaded
Between the fabric of a soul of mines that has faded
I am tired
I am sleepy
Sick of crying
Yet
I am weeping
Hold my hand as we walk against the sand
Into the water and float away with me
Beauty lies in these eyes
Which contain passionless pain
Holding the world loveless strain
Only to in habit such a nature that is truely inhumain
I am the poet who has lost her word in the moment
A singer whom which no one has yet herd
An artist whos creativity has shaded
Between the fabric of a soul of mines that has faded
I am tired
I am sleepy
Sick of crying
Yet
I am weeping
Published 2nd Apr 2011
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2nd Apr 2011 6:07pm
......I like this a lot. Deeply descriptive, almost visual. Particularly like the metaphoric allusions:
"I am the poet who has lost her word in the moment
A singer whom which no one has yet herd
An artist whos creativity has shaded
Between the fabric of a soul of mines that has faded"
Good stuff. Post more : )
"I am the poet who has lost her word in the moment
A singer whom which no one has yet herd
An artist whos creativity has shaded
Between the fabric of a soul of mines that has faded"
Good stuff. Post more : )
2nd Apr 2011 11:28pm
3rd Apr 2011 00:37am
It's a preety poem which i enjoyed reading
I would suggest running it through a spell checker to dial it in perfectly, I just started doing that myself and it's a really nice finishing touch
I would suggest running it through a spell checker to dial it in perfectly, I just started doing that myself and it's a really nice finishing touch
3rd Apr 2011 00:43am
