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On Top
On top baby
That’s where
I want you to be
Take charge
I will submit today
Awaken that passion and fire
That I have seen before
Caress me in your warmth
Sustain me with those gifts
Make me feel genuine
Tomorrow’s another day
And I will be anew
(C) 2014 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
That’s where
I want you to be
Take charge
I will submit today
Awaken that passion and fire
That I have seen before
Caress me in your warmth
Sustain me with those gifts
Make me feel genuine
Tomorrow’s another day
And I will be anew
(C) 2014 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
Published 1st Jul 2014
| Edited 3rd Feb 2017
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1st Jul 2014 9:47pm
2nd Jul 2014 6:49pm
1st Jul 2014 10:03pm
To look into a man's eyes while on top of him, makin love to him tenderly and passionately - that's so challenging and satisfying. Sexy and feeling write!
2nd Jul 2014 6:51pm
Thank you,I'm on new groung here but I'm learning. Always appreciate your comments.
1st Jul 2014 10:50pm
This is excellent! I can feel the passion and the fire.
Thank you for sharing! :)
Thank you for sharing! :)
2nd Jul 2014 6:55pm
Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it. I will be attempting to write more on this subject. Crossing my fingers for luck.
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4th Jul 2014 1:46am
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6th Jul 2014 7:48pm
6th Jul 2014 7:59pm
X, such a beautiful and sexy job. I bow to u sir. Cannot wait for more
6th Jul 2014 8:32pm
21st Jul 2014 10:04pm
I have to admit this one made me think of what my fave is....:) Well done.
22nd Jul 2014 8:43pm
