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I remember I thought I will never be in that place to kiss you
So mindless
I remember I would just watch you laugh
So stunting
I remember I lost my words when I tried to talk to you
So thoughtful
I remember when you took my hat
So playful
I remember our first kiss
So Perfect
I remember when you disappeared
So invisi……
Yes Invisible After first grade we became nothing
Two different pathways we go
Good-Bye To all the “I like you a lot” notes
Good-Bye To The hands Joining
Just Saying goodbye I Never really had a chance too.
So mindless
I remember I would just watch you laugh
So stunting
I remember I lost my words when I tried to talk to you
So thoughtful
I remember when you took my hat
So playful
I remember our first kiss
So Perfect
I remember when you disappeared
So invisi……
Yes Invisible After first grade we became nothing
Two different pathways we go
Good-Bye To all the “I like you a lot” notes
Good-Bye To The hands Joining
Just Saying goodbye I Never really had a chance too.
Published 29th Jun 2014
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