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Silent
The creature you wanted
is finally free,
but your hand is closed?
Your eyes cannot see...
You have everything now
Maybe this is just a stumble?
Don’t leave her unattended,
Behind, she’ll crumble...
She needs your love
Not your wide-eyed ‘like’
This delicate being
has no petrol for fight.
You’ll notice the silence
and the glitter gone,
the magic leaves with her
And warmth you’ll mourn.
Her scent will haunt you
And mess with your head,
You’ll feel empty over
what you shoulda coulda said.
is finally free,
but your hand is closed?
Your eyes cannot see...
You have everything now
Maybe this is just a stumble?
Don’t leave her unattended,
Behind, she’ll crumble...
She needs your love
Not your wide-eyed ‘like’
This delicate being
has no petrol for fight.
You’ll notice the silence
and the glitter gone,
the magic leaves with her
And warmth you’ll mourn.
Her scent will haunt you
And mess with your head,
You’ll feel empty over
what you shoulda coulda said.
Published 26th Jun 2014
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26th Jun 2014 1:15am
26th Jun 2014 7:28am
26th Jun 2014 1:51am
26th Jun 2014 7:31am
absence makes the heart
go wander...
or something like that...
but the absence of words, of
things which need saying, that's
the saddest of silences...
nicely done, as ever...x
go wander...
or something like that...
but the absence of words, of
things which need saying, that's
the saddest of silences...
nicely done, as ever...x
26th Jun 2014 7:32am
Thank you... it's the absence of words than the ones that are said without heart that hurt... I appreciate your support truly xx
