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am I
am I but flesh and bone
do I have a purpose
in this fucked up world
carrying my carcass
over the earth for what
am I not seen or heard
like the living dead
shall I feed off the weak
and continue to suffer inside
do I have a purpose
in this fucked up world
carrying my carcass
over the earth for what
am I not seen or heard
like the living dead
shall I feed off the weak
and continue to suffer inside
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re: Re: am I
25th Jun 2014 1:57pm
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25th Jun 2014 2:48pm
Re: am I
25th Jun 2014 3:11pm
You are a seer and you feel.
And like me, not afraid to show your face.
YOU are my literary hero
xx
And like me, not afraid to show your face.
YOU are my literary hero
xx
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re: Re: am I
25th Jun 2014 3:38pm
I'm speechless Poet! Many would think that wasn't possible.
Fuck 'em!!! Lmfao...Your words mean so much. Thank you.
Fuck 'em!!! Lmfao...Your words mean so much. Thank you.
Re: am I
25th Jun 2014 7:28pm
so much depression in your poem, Tommie. you have many purposes. we in the underground need you to feed our addiction to your unique poetry...
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26th Jun 2014 3:54am
Re: am I
25th Jun 2014 10:20pm
There is no doubt in my mind that you have a purpose...it seems to me that you are a loving mother, stellar lover and a compassionate and fun friend...and damn what a carcass :)
Well written, Tommie!
Well written, Tommie!
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26th Jun 2014 3:55am
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25th Jun 2014 11:10pm
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26th Jun 2014 3:56am
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I'd really enjoy hearing your definition.
I'm a huge fan of individuality...most people I know and try to stay away from are those that never "own up to their own shit"...fake, living in a fantasy...honesty would kill them. I verbally blow people's hair back with my blunt, bold, no fucking around mouth. Turns out, they don't really want to hear the truth. Tough shit!
I choose to live life...we only get one. Festering isn't something I do, they're too many of those people doing that already. And I'm too much fun to be unhappy!
I truly appreciate you taking the time to read me and commenting. Thank you Jack Tex ; )
I'm a huge fan of individuality...most people I know and try to stay away from are those that never "own up to their own shit"...fake, living in a fantasy...honesty would kill them. I verbally blow people's hair back with my blunt, bold, no fucking around mouth. Turns out, they don't really want to hear the truth. Tough shit!
I choose to live life...we only get one. Festering isn't something I do, they're too many of those people doing that already. And I'm too much fun to be unhappy!
I truly appreciate you taking the time to read me and commenting. Thank you Jack Tex ; )
Re: am I
26th Jun 2014 8:41pm
I really enjoyed this dark write. You surprise me everytime you put pen to paper. Don't ever stop.
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26th Jun 2014 11:23pm