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invisable friend
There is two I call us old souls
Who we are is clueless differently the same
We do it with out notice
We play the same game
Never seeing what the other looks like
We are connected by a thing inside
Falling stars from the darkness
They are the clueless, we are the wise (asses)
Who we are is clueless differently the same
We do it with out notice
We play the same game
Never seeing what the other looks like
We are connected by a thing inside
Falling stars from the darkness
They are the clueless, we are the wise (asses)
Published 22nd Jun 2014
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22nd Jun 2014 7:36pm
Intriguing write, It evokes images of two people sharing something between them that no one else does or can see, but did you mean Invisible instead of Invisable? Enjoyed.
Anonymous
28th Jul 2014 2:22pm
United in darkness, great ink.
12th Sep 2014 8:11am
For some reason I felt like this was one person, like a split personality but I can see it from different views too. Shows how much everyone interprets words and especially writings so much. I actually had a lesson in class about that not too long ago. Excellent write though, very captivating.
Anonymous
22nd Jan 2015 8:30pm
Brilliant write.. thanks for sharing..
Dave
Dave
