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My Injection For Life
A Drip Seeps From The Top,
Cold Stare As It Slowly Slides,
And Drops,
Teasing Me As It Falls,
The point portraying A Prism Of bright,
Brilliant,
Sparkling light..
The Warm Sensation Of The Spear Piercing My Skin,
The Adrenaline Rush As It Seers Further In,
Anticipation As The Plunger Slowly Decends,
The Warm Flow Of Liquid,
Entering Slowly In,
A Deep Breath As My Body Braces,
My Mind Trembles,
My Heart Races..
I Let Out A Gasp,
Memory’s Flash Before Me,
The First Till The Last,
Reality Returns,
The Injection Of Life,
Revives Me,
Brings Me Back To Normal,
Whatever Normal May Be.
Cold Stare As It Slowly Slides,
And Drops,
Teasing Me As It Falls,
The point portraying A Prism Of bright,
Brilliant,
Sparkling light..
The Warm Sensation Of The Spear Piercing My Skin,
The Adrenaline Rush As It Seers Further In,
Anticipation As The Plunger Slowly Decends,
The Warm Flow Of Liquid,
Entering Slowly In,
A Deep Breath As My Body Braces,
My Mind Trembles,
My Heart Races..
I Let Out A Gasp,
Memory’s Flash Before Me,
The First Till The Last,
Reality Returns,
The Injection Of Life,
Revives Me,
Brings Me Back To Normal,
Whatever Normal May Be.
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WHEN U STATED INJECTION
Anonymous
29th Mar 2011 7:31pm
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re: WHEN U STATED INJECTION
30th Mar 2011 7:42am
re: re: Deep
30th Mar 2011 4:09pm
Yw btw I'm still reading his reply as well when you figure it out let me know Ty lol
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KS
30th Mar 2011 2:37am
re: KS
30th Mar 2011 7:43am
re: re: KS
30th Mar 2011 7:10pm
Okay, just needed to make sure! O: Great poem by the way, keep on doing what you're doin'.
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injection
30th Mar 2011 7:02am
it injected all type of injection in me, good bad , beautiful ugly
i read lots of time and still going
i read lots of time and still going
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re: injection
30th Mar 2011 7:44am
aha!
30th Mar 2011 7:18pm
darlin', this is great. you actually had me hung on every word, which is rare. and i still don't approve of the caps, but that's ok. this time. [:
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re: aha!
30th Mar 2011 7:31pm
Lol :o)
Being totaly honest with you I had this on my computer for weeks. I kept going back to try and finish it but couldnt. I'm so SOOO glad ya liked it (I was kinda glad to get it out the way to be honest :o)
Being totaly honest with you I had this on my computer for weeks. I kept going back to try and finish it but couldnt. I'm so SOOO glad ya liked it (I was kinda glad to get it out the way to be honest :o)
The metaphors are awesome
30th Mar 2011 7:29pm
The metaphors in this poem are awesome..the injection of my life revives me..beautiful..peace Crim
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re: The metaphors are awesome
30th Mar 2011 7:33pm
re: re: The metaphors are awesome
3rd Apr 2011 7:43am
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3rd Apr 2011 7:52am
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3rd Apr 2011 7:55am
Feel the Emotional Connection
24th Apr 2011 5:51am
I absolutely love this. The detail is amazing and clever. I felt such a deep emotional connection while reading this poem. Brilliant.
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25th Jun 2011 2:39pm
Shit, that was fast! i burned through it so quick but i could still see the projections in my head.
damn good man!
damn good man!
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