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Fuckin dentist
It seems like every time i go to the dentist
I get captain hook what an asshole
Next time i am eating a pb and j sand witch
In the waiting room
I get captain hook what an asshole
Next time i am eating a pb and j sand witch
In the waiting room
Published 20th Jun 2014
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20th Jun 2014 4:29pm
Nice starting lines...but where are the climactic lines and the end? In short, your poem is incomplete. Please continue...
"Next time i am eating a pb and j sand witch
In the waiting room" [what happened next?]
"Next time i am eating a pb and j sand witch
In the waiting room" [what happened next?]
20th Jun 2014 11:22pm
21st Jun 2014 00:08am
Anonymous
21st Jun 2014 4:08am
I know right!! Hilarious! Enjoyed! :)
