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Renku : a wet walk with Dady
hey, you little me
how about a stroll with dad
on this sunny day
yippee yes, I cannot wait
ride on shoulders, if i may
your smile is my love
to see the world through your eyes
hop on, lets go son
clip, clop, clip, hiho silver
riding a horse down the street
the sun shining bright
but why do i feel rain drops
down on my back, son
I don't know, what do you mean
having fun just you and me
we must hurry home
we'll be drenched from the storm
the road is too long
oh dad, i will tell the truth
it's my wet pants, no rainstorm
not wearing pampers?
but why son? you need a change
so do i, fun's done
the reason i didn't wear
i want to be grown like you
my sweet little boy
someday, you'll be a big man
stronger and wiser
I love you dad, very much
special day for you and I
So funny to use the Renku form for writting this story...
For comp "Wet T-shirt contest"
Published 19th Jun 2014
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Anonymous
15th Aug 2014 2:09am
Good stuff, Malin!
