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Call
Just a call just a call
Waiting for your just a damn call
Striking the wall
Searching the hall
'am waiting for your damn call
Seeing the wires dont fall
Trying not to disturb the reciever at all
'am waiting for your damn call
Rolling here and there like a ball
Standing still like a doll
'am waiting for your damn call
The time is getting too tall
Shivering and getting in the shawl
Thinking whether you forgot it or wat at all
That you have to give me just a miss call.
- Ashish
Waiting for your just a damn call
Striking the wall
Searching the hall
'am waiting for your damn call
Seeing the wires dont fall
Trying not to disturb the reciever at all
'am waiting for your damn call
Rolling here and there like a ball
Standing still like a doll
'am waiting for your damn call
The time is getting too tall
Shivering and getting in the shawl
Thinking whether you forgot it or wat at all
That you have to give me just a miss call.
- Ashish
Published 20th Oct 2009
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20th Oct 2009 7:11pm
Only the notes are matching and sounding rythmic...but is that all about a poem???
I m sorry don't misinterpret me but what is the purpose of this poem???
I m sorry don't misinterpret me but what is the purpose of this poem???
22nd Oct 2009 6:03pm
The recipient is desperately waiting for just a sign of meeting that is a miss call on his phone which will show him that she has came to meet him
25th Oct 2009 6:23am
I like this piece because i know how the narrator feels. I too have been in the position of wishing for someone to call, even for just a sign that they were thinking of you, to the point where you feel angry when you think they don't. nice work
