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The Tapestry of Your Mind
I stitch seams of stories sewn in stains
tracing their timeline in turbulent tones
navigating the news now naked & exposed
on the doorstep of your mysterious mind
entranced engaged and entering earnestly
lead on lacy labyrinth’s of leading lines
absent and abstract artfully you engage
the collective webs of words we weave
the pattern of pictures performs patiently
retrieved restored read out unrestricted
excerpts and examples of everyone but you
cleverly casting cloaks keeping you uncaptured
soldiers of twine solidarity storylines
fashioned by fabrics of fictional fables
the mystery moments your mind mentors
clothed carpeted capturing clever closure
......for michele..........
Published 7th Jun 2014
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Anonymous
15th Jun 2014 4:18am
This is beautiful, your prominent device of alliteration has woven a poem so free and lovely. Question: last word, "closure" is that purposely not italics or an error, if it's on purpose, quite the interesting and meaningful structural choice, if it's an error, no problem, don't fix it! Well done.
16th Jun 2014 4:41am
blush blush curtsy bow...am really trying to broaden my horizons with different styles, alas I evict these sibling type words so frequently... I get stuck on a sound and go all ADHD over it..sigh..I am playing with fonts, size etc of lettering, call it an experiment of sorts..just posted..and skipping off over to read you...
