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me
I am different,kind,strange
I am some one who is powerful
I am some one u can depend on, lean on for comfort
someone to be your friend
someone to call yours
I am some one who is powerful
I am some one u can depend on, lean on for comfort
someone to be your friend
someone to call yours
Published 26th Mar 2011
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Anonymous
- Edited 26th Mar 2011 8:21pm
26th Mar 2011 3:44am
guarantee that there are 2,000 other children exactly like you, down to the last pinkey toenail.
It's a shame; but it's true.
As for the poem itself, it's too simple, too repetitive, I'm not sure how you would fix this or this is just worth tossing (unless it means something to you, personally).
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It's a shame; but it's true.
As for the poem itself, it's too simple, too repetitive, I'm not sure how you would fix this or this is just worth tossing (unless it means something to you, personally).
:]
26th Mar 2011 3:51am
ya iits alittle presonal i would like it if u didnt call it trash or shameful
Anonymous
26th Mar 2011 4:51am
I wasn't calling your piece shameful - I was calling the fact that everyone's the same 'shameful', because everyone has been told from a young age that they're different; when really they're not.
Anonymous
26th Mar 2011 4:57am
And - if you didn't want critique on it, in the future, you can just press the button, that says something along the lines of 'Friendly feedback only' instead of 'Honest feedback'. :]
27th Mar 2011 6:15pm
