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THAT GIRL
this is about a girl in my class....
I catch her stealing glances at lecture
She's on my team in any class group fixture
I can almost see her walk to me in the near future
Just to say hi
With a big smile...Yes!
I know she wants to
Same with me too...but!
I wear wear the finest clothing
She's on the funniest clothes
I sit in the back with the real boys
She plays amongst the church girls
I got swagg
She sells bags ... after class
I drive
She rides ... on a bike
Now you see why??
Why I can't walk to her...and say hi
Why she won't walk to me...to say hello
I feel BIG
She feels small
She's barely my class
Tho we share the same class
Im always last
She never finish last
but in all her shotcomings
I still LIKE......THAT GIRL
Published 2nd Jun 2014
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2nd Jun 2014 3:51pm
2nd Jun 2014 4:38pm
2nd Jun 2014 4:37pm
3rd Jun 2014 7:16am
Darling,You know how the future usually turn out on a guy like you and a girl like her?
A girl like her end up Big and a guy like you end up 'feels small'!
Your poem highlight situations i used to see back in college.But the beauty of life is,out here(after college)the fine cloths does not matter much.It is your determination and brain which i think she got!!!
Nicely done!
A girl like her end up Big and a guy like you end up 'feels small'!
Your poem highlight situations i used to see back in college.But the beauty of life is,out here(after college)the fine cloths does not matter much.It is your determination and brain which i think she got!!!
Nicely done!
3rd Jun 2014 7:21am
3rd Jun 2014 7:20am
Oh!CK,another way of looking at it is,if you do like her,why not make her whom you want her to be?make her dress and smile and hang the way you want her.
You can obviously learn something from her,e.g entrepreneur skills and she can learn some from you!
Lol!
Interesting write!Reminds me of literature days and analyzing of characters!
You can obviously learn something from her,e.g entrepreneur skills and she can learn some from you!
Lol!
Interesting write!Reminds me of literature days and analyzing of characters!
3rd Jun 2014 7:25am
turning her into someone I want is quite impossible from this distance lolz....literature must be interesting,never had the opportunity to study literature o
3rd Jun 2014 8:20am
Haha!I i hope you will get the opportunity to!Literature is eye opening!It teach you to look at the society and the world at large in a different view!
