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Thru the Screen
Thru the screen
He sees me
Wants me
Craves me
Thru the screen
He touches me
Taunts me
Saves me
Thru the screen
He loves me
Takes me
ENSLAVES ME!!!
He sees me
Wants me
Craves me
Thru the screen
He touches me
Taunts me
Saves me
Thru the screen
He loves me
Takes me
ENSLAVES ME!!!
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Re: Thru the Screen
30th May 2014 10:41pm
Re: Thru the Screen
31st May 2014 2:37am
I read it as a kind of obsession as you watched an actor on a movie screen, when you probably were referring to a screen door? In any case, you got your point across crisply , but somewhat too briefly for standing applause.
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Re: Thru the Screen
It was actually about an online relationship. Thanx for ur honest opinion
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Anonymous
5th Jun 2014 3:08pm
I like the open thoughts.. :)

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6th Jun 2014 2:52am
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10th Jun 2014 12:47pm
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12th Jun 2014 9:47pm
Re: Thru the Screen
12th Jun 2014 4:36pm
It's kind of scary to know someone's watching your every move but with technology privacy goes out the window. Thought provoking write.
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re: Re: Thru the Screen
12th Jun 2014 9:46pm
It wasnt about watching somebodys every move. It was more to do with how off guard i was taken by what our chats turned into. Glad i got u to thinking tho. Thanx for giving it a read.
Re: Thru the Screen
12th Jun 2014 4:43pm
Hell, I gotta get me a screen!!LOL!!
Great lil piece sweets!!!!
Love the read!!
Sir Lancelott
Great lil piece sweets!!!!
Love the read!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: Thru the Screen
12th Jun 2014 9:49pm
Lol.....we all need a screen like that one was. Thanx hun!!! Glad u enjoyed it
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5th Jul 2014 10:17pm
Re: Thru the Screen
6th Jul 2014 2:48pm
Thanx so much!! After reading ur work this is a definite compliment
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle
Re: Thru the Screen
10th Jul 2014 7:31pm
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10th Jul 2014 7:37pm
Re: Thru the Screen
24th Jul 2014 10:53pm
Just seeing where you started...love this poem...
Through the screen??? Have you been watching me? Lol
Through the screen??? Have you been watching me? Lol
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re: Re: Thru the Screen
27th Jul 2014 5:26pm
Hmmmmm....have i? Ill never tell. A grl cant divulge ALL of her secrets ;-)
Re: Thru the Screen
15th Dec 2014 00:16am
Really enjoyed this, Belle. There's the distance afforded by the screen, but that decreases until the capture. That screen gets shredded...
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