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Work Deep
No time anymore
I've run out
I feel so worked
so immensely devout
Time slows down
stress builds up
On my shoulders
without no luck
So I retire
Tonight to sleep
Just to wake
Tomorrow work deep
I've run out
I feel so worked
so immensely devout
Time slows down
stress builds up
On my shoulders
without no luck
So I retire
Tonight to sleep
Just to wake
Tomorrow work deep
Published 17th Oct 2009
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18th Oct 2009 11:03pm
I like this. It's kind of like the words falter at the end of every little phrase, which really reflects the topic of the poem, I think.
19th Oct 2009 12:02pm
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