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Tchuuut, tchuuut
"Tchuuut, tchuuut", says the train
"Hurry, up if I wish reduce my pain
Because seeing Malin so sad
He doesn't see his love, how he's bad,
"snif, snif", he says, he cries like a soap
In the train, which is becoming a boat!!!"
Published 22nd May 2014
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22nd May 2014 6:01pm
22nd May 2014 6:13pm
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22nd May 2014 7:14pm
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22nd May 2014 9:05pm
Glad you like it, Gabriel... Ant the lines you like had no sense, just for rhyme and funny... I never saw a soap crying, but the picture in my mind seemed nice and then I used it!
