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Socially conditioned
Impressively cloned
Perfect repetition
Identity disowned
I try to hide
In the cracks of society
I cant abide
conform ,hide anxiety
We are the corruption
Led by a blind faith
Excuse my disruption
But do you see me now?
Published 22nd May 2014
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26th May 2014 2:19pm
I was recently trying to teach my students about surreal art ... Your piece has overtures of Magrittes's Son of Man ...
He said, "There is an interest in that which is hidden and which the visible does not show us. This interest can take the form of a quite intense feeling, a sort of conflict, one might say, between the visible that is hidden and the visible that is present."
We all struggle to be seen - be visible ... Thank You for sharing your perspective on this with your ink
He said, "There is an interest in that which is hidden and which the visible does not show us. This interest can take the form of a quite intense feeling, a sort of conflict, one might say, between the visible that is hidden and the visible that is present."
We all struggle to be seen - be visible ... Thank You for sharing your perspective on this with your ink
26th May 2014 2:30pm
6th Jun 2014 11:10pm
wow, these first four lines are dope, well formed write, thanks for posting^_^
13th Jun 2014 00:32am
20th Jul 2014 8:48pm
I have written on this very affliction of the cookie cutter image and not fitting in. Nice write.
