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Re: Steely Feathers - Senryu
20th May 2014 6:37pm
re: Re: Steely Feathers - Senryu
20th May 2014 10:13pm
Didn't I mention that I was exactly
having in mind
one of those
scary
(°<°)
pigeons?
having in mind
one of those
scary
(°<°)
pigeons?
re: re: Re: Steely Feathers - Senryu
20th May 2014 10:47pm
Re: Steely Feathers - Senryu
Anonymous
20th May 2014 8:40pm
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re: Re: Steely Feathers - Senryu
20th May 2014 10:17pm
Thank you, Gabriel :-). I 'm not quite sure about the attribute 'lovely' but yes,
I tried to express my not so lovely feelings in a lovely way. Glad, you realized it :-D!
(´・` )♡
I tried to express my not so lovely feelings in a lovely way. Glad, you realized it :-D!
(´・` )♡
re: Re: Steely Feathers - Senryu
20th May 2014 10:47pm
Re: Steely Feathers - Senryu
21st May 2014 1:44am
I've always thought pigeons to be paranoid schizophrenic squatters ... for me your piece speaks more of a powerful bird seeking freedom
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re: Re: Steely Feathers - Senryu
21st May 2014 7:15am
You're right. But I wanted to tease our dartford a little (sorry for that, Paul!!!).
Good that you're reminded of a powerful bird since it's one of those I had in mind. Breaking free, at least mentally.
Good that you're reminded of a powerful bird since it's one of those I had in mind. Breaking free, at least mentally.
Re: Steely Feathers - Senryu
21st May 2014 2:15am
re: Re: Steely Feathers - Senryu
21st May 2014 7:16am
Re: Steely Feathers - Senryu
21st May 2014 5:23am
re: Re: Steely Feathers - Senryu
21st May 2014 7:19am
Sometimes you can't do it without damage... But perhaps it's too much to demand to regain freedom, unscarred.
Re: Steely Feathers - Senryu
Anonymous
21st May 2014 8:00am
When you reach freedom,you become wingless.
The phoenix rises!!!
The phoenix rises!!!
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re: Re: Steely Feathers - Senryu
21st May 2014 8:13am
No rise before a fall ... Your understanding and insightfulness is highly appreciated, Fay. Thank you :-).
Re: Steely Feathers - Senryu
21st May 2014 11:46am
Strong warning in this ink!
guess whomever you're referring to
don't know who they're messing with huh?
Go get em lady! :)
guess whomever you're referring to
don't know who they're messing with huh?
Go get em lady! :)
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re: Re: Steely Feathers - Senryu
21st May 2014 9:37pm
You might be right, dear Poe :-). I'm nice to a certain point but then some people should get out of my way. Thank you for feeling me!
Re: Steely Feathers - Senryu
22nd May 2014 5:27am
re: Re: Steely Feathers - Senryu
22nd May 2014 7:59pm
And the best is - you don't hear us approach before it's too late ... The advantage of dark wings.