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Rush
Scarlet, scarlet,
it was a scarlet hour...
The rushing recedes, leaves me
bitten by the workings
of my teeth and lips.
Regrets leak through my palms.
I raise my chin, facing the children
that sprung from the scarlet hour.
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Re: Rush
Anonymous
17th May 2014 1:50am
Yep, dark hotness....that's what you do! Excellent, Mike.
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Re: Rush
Anonymous
17th May 2014 8:06am
"Regrets leak through my palms"
Great line(s)!
Great line(s)!
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re: Re: Rush
17th May 2014 2:21pm
Re: Rush
17th May 2014 3:47pm
This piece seems almost 'volatile'....
can f e e l the intense emotion of this piece--deep within...building...
rising....finally bursting forth--a sudden 'scarlet' rage...
(Approach[this person]with caution...??) ;)
can f e e l the intense emotion of this piece--deep within...building...
rising....finally bursting forth--a sudden 'scarlet' rage...
(Approach[this person]with caution...??) ;)
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re: Re: Rush
18th May 2014 7:40am
LOVE that you got this.
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts, Enchantress, they are deeply appreciated.
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts, Enchantress, they are deeply appreciated.
Re: Rush
17th May 2014 5:36pm
re: Re: Rush
18th May 2014 7:41am
Intrigue is the brother of curiosity, and we all know what happened to the cat...
;)
Thanks, Cesar!
;)
Thanks, Cesar!
Re: Rush
18th May 2014 12:39pm
Re: Rush
27th May 2014 6:35am
Lust and consequences - one dictates the other, often draped in red ...
Wonderfully penned
Wonderfully penned
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re: Re: Rush
27th May 2014 4:42pm
If we accept consequenses, does that free our actions?
Thank you for the thoughts, Lobo!
Thank you for the thoughts, Lobo!
re: re: Re: Rush
27th May 2014 10:28pm
To answer your question succinctly: Yes. When I look at certain points of my life I should be dead three times over ... There were certain consequences I wasn't prepared to accept so I pulled away from certain situations that would shock most but it's just the way I grew up and the people I was around.
I still can be reckless but it usually involves copious amounts of Jack Daniels ... 420 ... And a certain partner in crime
I still can be reckless but it usually involves copious amounts of Jack Daniels ... 420 ... And a certain partner in crime
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