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Inquiring Apprehension
Neon Orange Sunset sky
looking ablaze of fire & beauty
communicating rays of passion & need…
on my window sill
don't open my door unless you know what you want,
Your verbal thrusts & kisses
are making their way to taunt at my 'sexuality',
when you know it's throbbing with Vitality
The ease of your mind to manifest sexually...
pleases me,
mentally & Physically
Just lay on my bed & let me
strip you of all bands & barriers,
atop numbing sheets that crave your warmth
rightfully take your place,
instead of imagining what our eyes trace.
Reach my 'sexual zone',
you can't attain alone!
Allow my nails to scratch & sear provocatively,
against ‘bare tender Carmel pleasure laced Skin’
You exist within me feeling robbed of something...
I don't possess.
I'm entitled to the Essence,
vibing to your presence....
but it's not mine,
radiating from your Body Soul & Mind.
I just wanna’ share,
Show me If you care..
looking ablaze of fire & beauty
communicating rays of passion & need…
on my window sill
don't open my door unless you know what you want,
Your verbal thrusts & kisses
are making their way to taunt at my 'sexuality',
when you know it's throbbing with Vitality
The ease of your mind to manifest sexually...
pleases me,
mentally & Physically
Just lay on my bed & let me
strip you of all bands & barriers,
atop numbing sheets that crave your warmth
rightfully take your place,
instead of imagining what our eyes trace.
Reach my 'sexual zone',
you can't attain alone!
Allow my nails to scratch & sear provocatively,
against ‘bare tender Carmel pleasure laced Skin’
You exist within me feeling robbed of something...
I don't possess.
I'm entitled to the Essence,
vibing to your presence....
but it's not mine,
radiating from your Body Soul & Mind.
I just wanna’ share,
Show me If you care..
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Re: Inquiring Apprehension
16th May 2014 3:37am
Oh I care! Lol! I love your approach to what I'll call "traditional poetry", and let's no forget the lustful musings! My llady thanks you in advance ;)
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re: Re: Inquiring Apprehension
16th May 2014 5:31am
Hahah Yes, Some mercy to my aching words! Well thank you, just curious why would you call this "traditional poetry"? Of course within lust i trust.
Aww I'm pleased with the advance;D!
Aww I'm pleased with the advance;D!
Re: Inquiring Apprehension
16th May 2014 4:19am
OHMYGoodness! This was truly a sexy azz piece, written sensually, Honey. I have a little humble critique but I'll inbox it to you. Xo
Thanks for sharing your sexy side. ;)
Thanks for sharing your sexy side. ;)
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re: Re: Inquiring Apprehension
16th May 2014 5:35am
Awwww Thank You So Much Mama! Yes, i see..it is greatly appreciated. Of course, gotta let it shine sometimes, I try to conceal it but I'm learning to express;D!
Re: Inquiring Apprehension
16th May 2014 5:53am
Traditional in the way the last word of a sentence rhymes frequently. I don't know the proper names for different styles so I wing it when necessary ;)
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re: Re: Inquiring Apprehension
17th May 2014 00:05am
Ahhh completely get cha'!
Haha I feel it, I'm not proper either..i just write words & read em':)
Haha I feel it, I'm not proper either..i just write words & read em':)
Re: Inquiring Apprehension
16th May 2014 7:37pm
You are right, You can't attain alone!!
Great piece Ms. Divinity!!!
Love reading your sweet stuff!!
Sir Lancelott
Great piece Ms. Divinity!!!
Love reading your sweet stuff!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: Inquiring Apprehension
17th May 2014 00:06am
Most indeedy....atleast i think, excuse my made up words haha!!
Why Thank You for always reading=).
Why Thank You for always reading=).
Re: Inquiring Apprehension
17th May 2014 2:24am
Hotter than hot sauce and mellow as the smell of a flower. You beautiful black maiden you!
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re: Re: Inquiring Apprehension
17th May 2014 7:21am
Haha Awww your words are so humbling & exciting! Thank You that means so much=D..Love your feedback, Appreciate you stopping by!!
Re: Inquiring Apprehension
17th May 2014 7:39am
Well now tht is a deep dark desire of carnal lust tht i had the privilege of being part of as if I were there on ur bed tht has me Longing t now the true u. This is wow love it
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re: Re: Inquiring Apprehension
17th May 2014 10:18pm
Aww shucks, you don't know how happy that makes me feel!=D
I'm so pleased I could emit anything to that nature, Thank you for your sweet, encouraging comment & RL Add=)!
I'm so pleased I could emit anything to that nature, Thank you for your sweet, encouraging comment & RL Add=)!
Re: Inquiring Apprehension
18th May 2014 5:42am
fabulously seductive scribe
fav part:
"trip you of all bands & barriers,
atop numbing sheets that crave your warmth
rightfully take your place" i truly enjoyed
fav part:
"trip you of all bands & barriers,
atop numbing sheets that crave your warmth
rightfully take your place" i truly enjoyed
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re: Re: Inquiring Apprehension
18th May 2014 6:13am